大家好 这是我第一封外贸发信

我今年刚毕业，学习的专业并非外贸或者英语，而是土木工程。但是现在，必须走上外贸这一条，我希望得到大家的帮助~这是我写的一封外贸发信，朋友帮忙改了一下。大家再帮忙看下 ！谢谢了！ 标题：your future suplier high prices it will suffer? how to ensure quality low price? how to do bad repair parts? this is a chinese factory manufacturing more than 10 series of pumps, containing hundreds of kinds! you will get the most economical and the most efficient pumps designed by cad software, according to your specific circumstance. it‘s a global village but unfortunately we still he time zones. any problem you will get reply in 6 hours! looking foeword to your reply, even without. 这个是我写的 但是朋友告诉我，中式英语很明显。。老外根本不这么这么说话 your future suplier what if no profit guaranteed due to higher prices? how to ensure quality with lower prices? what will you do in case of no well-offered after sale service? this is a chinese factory specializing in manufacturing pumps. its products cover 10 categories, featuring hundreds of kinds! you will get the most economical and efficient pumps designed by cad software.it can also customize products according to your requirements. for any problem, pls do not hesitate to contact us! you will get our reply within 6 hours! best regards 这是朋友帮忙修改的 他叫ctvideo??谢谢各位外贸人的无私 让我一个很新的新人找到家的感觉 一个素不相识的人 晚上帮助我到很晚！谢谢！