征文:2008年的最后一单,算是过年了。(付英文邮件)

Leianne.Malachin
大家好,我这里祝各位外贸同仁牛年大吉。我和大家分享一下这一个小单的过程,希望大家多提宝贵意见啊。 1月13日, 到这样的询盘, Dear April Yuan I need a little of titanium wire of diameter 1.25 mm. Could you say me if you he this wire, please? And Which is the minimum quantity that can sell me? Could you send me a quotation of this, please? KING REGARDS 去了他们网站看看,是医疗仪器的。1.25的丝,牌号,标准,公差,这些我们这行交易必须要弄清的参数他都没有提到,我觉得必须得要问清楚,最起码得要知道他用来什么的啊。便回复如下: Dear M, Many thanks for your enquiry on Jan13rd,2009. We hve not any 1.25 mm titanium wires on stock. Because we usually make no stockpiles at the end of a year. However, we can process them if get an order. It would not take long . Our minimum quantity order is 5KG . There are many kinds of titanium wires.Dear M, would you please tell me your material (Trademark) ? Different trademark means different materials. eg, Gr2 stands Commerical Pure Titanium , Gr5 stands titanium alloy with aluminum and vanadium??in it. And would you mind telling me What you will use it for ? I he made a quotation as fellow for your reference: Name:Titanium coilling wires OD: 1.25mm Trademark:*** Quantity:*** Standard:*** FOB price: *** Wish that can meet your requirements. And I'm waiting for your reply. Yours Sincerely April 14日,到回复 Dear Yuan Excuse me, Could you say me, please the wire is of a only piece? Could you send me a formal quotation (using your organization paper) where this has the terms of payment, time of delivery, bank count, please? KING REGARDS 我问的问题他没有回,而且"of a only piece"我又不能确定是什么意思。当即回复如下 Dear Luuis, I'm not sure your sentence"please the wire is of a only piece?" And I he made a formal quotation . Although it is not on my company paper. I'm sure that it has the same effect. I he enclosed it as an attachment, please check it. Looking for your reply Yours Sincerely 15日到回复 Dear Yuan, Sorry, only piece for us is, that the wire is manufactured in a single piece, that is to say does not come in sections. The quotation is in proces of authorization. I he a question. Could you say me in which date are your Spring Festival Holidays? King Regards M 原来他是说一整盘丝啊。我当时就和商确认了,他们说可以,(就在这里出差错了) 我当时回复的邮件可能忘了保存了,内容就是确认是一整卷丝,并告知放假时间,说越早订单时间回越多。 今天先到这里吧 呵呵。
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on for you, what is the delivery time for an order of 5 kg of 1.25mm titanium wire?

KING REGARDS

根据客户的回复,他们需要的是无接缝的单段钛线。因此,需要向供应商确认这一点,以便做出准确的报价。同时,客户还要求更详细的报价和交付时间。在回复邮件中,应向客户提供清晰明了的报价信息和交付细节,以便让客户了解交货时间和付款方式等具体细节。
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  • mike.chan
    不错,顶下,楼主挺努力
    2014-03-21
  • Leianne.Malachin
    客户有回复吗?现在?期待,最害怕这样的供货商。。。小单不好。大单不来。。。
    2014-03-21
  • Alberto.Acosta
    好快,不过我还是觉得质量比较重要哦~
    2014-03-20
  • Daero.King
    估计质量客户难满意了。
    其实不应该过于急促,
    可以跟客户解释一下年后发货,以保证质量啊。
    ANYWAYS,恭喜LZ。
    2014-03-20
  • Leianne.Malachin
    呵呵,挺好的。我也在努力得到
    2014-03-19
  • sun2
    不错,顶下,楼主挺努力
    2014-03-19
  • Daero.King
    我当时也觉得不美,但到时候了。  如果改到年后是否就会好一些。
    2014-03-18
  • mike.chan
    一个夜班就能赶出来的东西,你们老板就这么谨慎?
    很多中国人就这样,小地方精明得不得了,碰到一个100万美金的单子估计把老婆贴上去都愿意。你这个单子的结果估计不会太圆满,应该直说质量不行得重的。
    2014-03-18
  • mike.guo
    怎么没人顶一下啊,是不是太长了啊
    2014-03-17
  • Vineet.Dagar
    感谢版主的鼓励,信心倍增啊,其实我写这些是抛砖引玉来着。主要与大家分享过程和我的想法,还有我的英文行文。期待高手多提宝贵意见啊。

    17日
    Dear Yuan,
    I send you the PO for the titanium wire.
    Could you send me the invoice as soon as possible, please?
    I wait your notices.
    He a nice weekend.
    KING REGARDS


      可能是我说我们要放假了,越早订单,越早发货吧。他在我发了信的第二天就发了订单过来。但超简单,就是品名和我报的价格。我原来的报价单说的是款到发货,接到订单就始产品(时间就3天左右),虽然没有到预付款,但一接到这封信,我就觉得客户是个实在人。当时我报价时只报了货值,计划运费到付。可快递公司说不答应,我重新了加上运费的。

       Dear M,
      
         I'm glad to get your Purchase Order.  But there is sti
    2014-03-17
  • Daero.King
    客户确实是挺有诚意的一人。
    谢谢参与,静待后续
    2014-03-16
  • Vineet.Dagar
    我也感觉,可能也是向我一样,第二语言才是英文。
    2014-03-16
  • mike.chan
    谢谢楼主分享,很受益。但感觉对方的英语不是那么正统。呵呵
    2014-03-15
  • Leianne.Malachin
    哈哈,一大堆的英文,看起来有点困难,不过总归是好事,恭喜楼主
    2014-03-15
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