你的这个邮件属于事后跟进邮件, follow up email。下面我花10分钟的时间写一个这样的邮件。
邮件标题: Hi {First_name}, it was a pleasure to meet you at XXX Trade Show !
邮件正文: HI {First_Name},
How are you? It was a great pleasure to meet you.I think we had a nice talk over XXXXX. As a follow up (As promised), I would like to send you the details of our company and products (You can find it attached to this email.) I believe our solution would be a nice fit for your company. [接下来用2-3句话详细阐述产品对客户公司的benefits]
If you would like to schedule for a call or online chat, we can do it. Let me know your thoughts.
As per your request, I am sending you the detailed specification for XXX model. FYI, we use high-quality imported material with zero lead for this model. It is very popular in European market, as consumers are more demanding for green products.(从细节入手,给客户提供充足的信息,同时暗示你的东西是好的,为何价格会比较贵。即便不直说,客户也清楚了。)
Can you tell me how many pieces do you need for this model? And what is your requirement for the package?(通过提问,将客户的注意力放在能够向前推进的细节上。只要客户一点一点地给你提供构成一个完整订单的详细信息,你就在往订单一步步迈进。)
It is a great pleasure to talk with you on Canton Fair, and know your interests in our XXX products.
After the fair, I collected a few more information on our sales, which might be helpful for you. FYI, for this model, our sales in XXX country (需要同客户接近的市场)is XXXX. Our customers said that the market specially like the XXX feature of XXX(products).
I am very confident that you can sell XXX very well in your market. Anything I can do to help you to research or test the market, please just tell me.
4、邮件标题如何写: 其实我上次写的展会后客户跟进邮件模板已经有一些建议了,类似毅冰的一个mail group的打法,用好了很受客户欢迎的。因为展会中见过面有名片,所以邮件标题可以包含客户的名字,假如是Luca他在展会看了某款产品表示感兴趣,那么邮件标题可以这样写 : Re: Electrical Motor inquired by Luca at Hannover fair / 公司名 就这样就可以了,邮件标题不能过长,也别和我这个一样,适当换一个模板。5、邮件内容:根据实际情况来写,前面简单介绍一下哪个展会上认识的、日期、情况,介绍几句话足矣。类似外贸开发信一样的操作手法,简单几句话介绍下自己工厂,如果客户感兴趣,详细的报价和样品都可以再另外一封邮件提供,这样可以赢得客户的回复就再好不过了。关键要素:简短问候、介绍自己、展会产品、如需要可另外提供产品图片,样品、报价等。
附上一些展会后跟进邮件模板:
Dear Mr. Luca,We are glad to meet you in XXX FairWe are specializing in manufacturing XXX. Now we can supply Product A, Product B, Product C, in varieties.Please contact us freely as a good friend if you are interested in our products.Your early reply will be highly appreciated.Best regards,XXX
Hi Mr. Luca,How are you doing? Do you back to your office? Glad to get your name card from Hannover fair.This is John from ***. We specialized in manufacture XXX, and all our products with CE/UL approved!Regarding the XXX your selected on the fair, pls find the details with best offer in attachment.Hope to get good news from you! Thanks.Best regards,XXX
Dear Mr. ***,Welcome to visiting our factory at HK fair. It’s our pleasure!Regarding the items you interested, could you pls give us some more details? Such as material, dimension, design, etc. It will be very useful for us to quote the CORRECT price!Please give me your time schedule before your visiting. We’ll arrange to pick you up from the airport. Please call my cell phone if urgency: +86-136-****-****Thanks & best regards,XXX
开发信的写作和英语的商业书信的写作基本相同,都可以参照7C原则,即Clearess 清楚、Conciseness 简洁、Courtesy 礼貌、Consideration 体谅、Conpleteness 完整、Concreteness 具体、Correctness 正确。 清楚是要把你所要想表达的清楚的告诉对方,让对方可以清楚的了解你的意图。简洁是用词用语尽量简洁简短,可以一句说完的内容尽量不要用两句。比如我们将随时为你服务,就可以用We assure you of our best services at all times.这句比We shall spare no efforts in endeavouring to be of service to you.简单,能使你写起来轻松,对方读起来也轻松,无形中提升了对方对你的好感。礼貌则是用语和称呼要尊敬对方,能写Dear sirs 就不要直呼sirs或者gentlemen等。体谅是站在对方的立场,强调为对方着想,以对方的观点和立场看问题。比如:The current exchange rate is in your favour.当前的汇率对你方有利。可以瞬间提升对你的信任。完整即你要完整的表达你要表达的内容和意思,什么人、什么事、什么时候、什么原因、什么方式等。具体是内容的表达要具体且明确,就是说你的某种产品卖什么样的价格,有什么样的条件要一五一十的交代清楚,避免使用类似:soon、at an early date之类的模糊不清的话。正确不仅是单词拼写和语法的使用以及标点符号要正确,还要把双方的权力和义务、利害关系、企业形象等书写正确。尤其要注意产品的名称、尺码、单价、总价等书写正确。开发信完成以上7个要点基本上就可以说是一篇优秀的开发信了。 以下是两个简单的模板: We thank you for your letter of January 10 and shall be glad to enter into business relations with your firm. As you know, it is our policy to trade with the people of all countries on the basis of equality and mutual benefit. We believe we shall be able, by joint efforts, to promote friendship as well as business. We are sending you 5 pamphlets and a price list covering part of our exports. Please advise what articles you are interested in at present. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
We are pleased to announce that we intend to intensify our activities in your country. It is our serious and keen interest to realize such a development for our mutual benefit. We are a trading company involved in import and export business throughout the world. We belong to a group of companies established during the turn of 20th century. The attached statement will give you some more information which will surely be helpful to open 2 business relations between us. Within the activities of the company we have recently established a new department under the management of Mr. XXX who has long experience in the Far East Trade sinee 1993. This department is mainly interested in the import of products from your country especially in: XXX XXX XXX However,we will also be active in export of chemicals and we invite your inquiries. We seriously hope that a voluminous and continuous business might be established and please rest assured that we are always doing our utmost to realize a good business relationship with you. We would be very pleased to be of service to you and hope to submit to you our inquiries soon. 以上两个模板的信头和结尾礼词可以根据自己的习惯写作。