菜鸟的一封开发信, 求指点

jemom
hey K,
Glad to learn you're on the market of ***, we are the manufacturer of ***.
Our main products cover *****. We are a SpecialSteel machinery from China with high quality and low price.
If any products cover yr demand, pls contact us further information. We're sure yr any inquiry will get promprt attention.

Kind rgds,

Jes

第一次写开发信,求大神指点
2016-07-21 462阅读
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AI回答:
您好,

我看到您对外贸市场非常感兴趣,我们是一家特种钢机械制造商,并将自己定位以高质量和低价格著称。

我们的主要产品包括****,这些产品已广泛应用于多个行业。如果您需要这些东西,或者想了解更多相关信息,请不要犹豫,马上联系我们吧。

我们相信,您对我们的询问一定会得到及时的关注和回复。

祝好,

Jes
2023-05-31
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  • 东汉末年-LED
    我改成这样:
    Hi K,
    Chinese supplier of XXX with superior quality and competitive price.
    Here are some parameters of our xxx products(都是产品卖点):
    1)xxx
    2)xxx
    3)xxx
    Any inquiries, just let us know.

    Best regards,
    XXX
    XXX company
    Email:xxx
    Phone: xxx
    2016-07-23
  • jemom
    DearK,Goodday,Gladtolearnyou'reonthemarketof***,wearethestockistandmillingofspecialsteelfromChina.Ourmainproductscover:。。。Ifanyproductsneeded,plscontactusforfurtherinformation.Kindrgds,Je__________________________________________。。。Co.,LtdAddre:·······Email:je@klr=.l??d_okg Tel: Fax:zllpmyylkkd.l??d_?s_rd=/r/r_okg修改了下
    2016-07-22
  • jemom
    十分感谢, 受教啦~
    2016-07-22
  • 九姑娘
    Hello K,
    Glad to know you're on the market of ***,
    we are the profeional manufacturer in *** field with * years.(如果工厂生产时间两三年就不用写上了)
    ........

    Kind rgds,
    Jes
    2016-07-22
  • vickyvicky
    hey K,
    Glad to learn you're on the market of ***, we are the manufacturer of ***from China.
    and the main products cover *****.
    If any products needed, pls contact us for further information. We're sure yr any inquiry will get promprt attention.

    Kind rgds,
    Jes
    略有改动 请参考
    2016-07-22
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