菜鸟的一封开发信, 求指点

hey K,
Glad to learn you're on the market of ***, we are the manufacturer of ***.
Our main products cover *****. We are a SpecialSteel machinery from China with high quality and low price.
If any products cover yr demand, pls contact us further information. We're sure yr any inquiry will get promprt attention.

Kind rgds,

Jes

第一次写开发信，求大神指点

行业分析开发信外贸工作

2016-07-21 435阅读

问题/讨论

我要向AI提问

AI回答：

您好，

我看到您对外贸市场非常感兴趣，我们是一家特种钢机械制造商，并将自己定位以高质量和低价格著称。

我们的主要产品包括****，这些产品已广泛应用于多个行业。如果您需要这些东西，或者想了解更多相关信息，请不要犹豫，马上联系我们吧。

我们相信，您对我们的询问一定会得到及时的关注和回复。

祝好，

Jes

2023-05-31

追问：

东汉末年-LED

我改成这样：
Hi K,
Chinese supplier of XXX with superior quality and competitive price.
Here are some parameters of our xxx products(都是产品卖点)：
1)xxx
2)xxx
3)xxx
Any inquiries, just let us know.

Best regards,
XXX
XXX company
Email:xxx
Phone: xxx
2016-07-23
jemom

DearK,Goodday,Gladtolearnyou'reonthemarketof***,wearethestockistandmillingofspecialsteelfromChina.Ourmainproductscover:。。。Ifanyproductsneeded,plscontactusforfurtherinformation.Kindrgds,Je__________________________________________。。。Co.,LtdAddre:·······Email:je@klr=.l??d_okg Tel: Fax:zllpmyylkkd.l??d_?s_rd=/r/r_okg修改了下
2016-07-22
jemom

十分感谢，受教啦~
2016-07-22
九姑娘

Hello K,
Glad to know you're on the market of ***,
we are the profeional manufacturer in *** field with * years.(如果工厂生产时间两三年就不用写上了)
........

Kind rgds,
Jes
2016-07-22
vickyvicky

hey K,
Glad to learn you're on the market of ***, we are the manufacturer of ***from China.
and the main products cover *****.
If any products needed, pls contact us for further information. We're sure yr any inquiry will get promprt attention.

Kind rgds,
Jes
略有改动请参考
2016-07-22

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