我这封邮件有没有问题

刘生
Dear Jackie How are you?He a nice day. I am Victor,Henry's new colleague,from XXXX company.It is my honor to communicate with you.As you know,we he been business partner for many years.We thank you for your supporting and hope your business be prosperous.But we he not got news from you for long time since last order.Did our products don't fit your local market?Or is there any other reason make you stop purchasing recently?Would you mind give me feedback?We are willing to listening your comments and advise. Looking forward to hear from you.
外贸术语
2013-10-18 900阅读
问题/讨论
回复（4）
我要向AI提问
AI回答：
There are a few errors in the email that could be corrected:

Dear Jackie,

How are you? I hope you are having a nice day.

I am Victor, Henry's new colleague from XXXX company. It is an honor to communicate with you. As you know, we have been business partners for many years. We appreciate your support and hope your business is prosperous. However, we have not received any news from you since our last order. Did our products not fit your local market? Or is there another reason why you have stopped purchasing from us recently? Would you mind giving me feedback? We are willing to listen to your comments and advice.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,
Victor
2023-06-24
追问：
  • Sandeep.Agarwal
    不错，不错，如果要找海运费可以看下面的签名
    2013-10-20
  • 邵名
    3L 明显专业很多，LZ基本语法有待提高啊。

    Did our products don't fit your local market  怎么看，怎么变扭
    2013-10-20
  • Douglas.Wang
    I am Victor,Henry's new colleague,from XXXX company.It is my honor to communicate with you. We he been business partner for many years.Thank you for your supporting and hope your business be prosperous.Since we he not got news from you for a long time, I am wondering if our products fit your local market? Any feedback is highly appreciated.

    Thanks in advance.

    了个小改动，希望对你有帮助。 FYI
    2013-10-19
  • Sandeep.Agarwal
    写的挺好的
    2013-10-19
立即登录，查看全部内容
热门悬赏
更多
最新回答
导航
相关问答