外贸大神帮忙修改的开发信模版

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花钱找大神帮忙修改的开发信模版,字数内容比较多,没法全部贴出来。
模版目录:
1.激活好久没下单的老客户 邮件模版 (10篇)
2.第一封开发信 邮件模版(3篇)
3.针对客户产品已经有同类产品的客户开发信模版 (3篇)
4.针对客户说要跟别人合作了的 邮件模版(2篇)
5.展会结束后,追踪邮件模版 (2篇)
6.针对客户砍价的 邮件模版 (2篇)
模版内容会定期更新和增加,有需要的可以把邮箱地址私信给我,满200后统一发。
大家都帮忙顶顶,凑够人数了一起发,不然一个一个发太费时间了。
2016-05-25 783阅读
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AI回答:
你好,针对你提供的开发信模版,我有以下意见和建议:

1. 邮件模版字数过多,可能会让客户感到厌烦和不耐烦。建议简化模版内容,集中精力突出关键信息,让邮件更加易读易懂。

2. 在发送开发信时,需要注意客户的需求和利益,针对客户的需求和利益编写邮件内容。过多关注自己的产品和销售策略,可能会让客户感到无所适从,从而导致邮件未能起到很好的销售效果。

3. 在邮件模版中,需要注意语言表达的准确性和专业性。细节方面,如邮件主题和发件人名称等,也需要做到简洁明了,切勿使用太过花哨的字眼和句式。

希望以上意见和建议能对你有所帮助,如果你还有其他问题或需要帮助,请随时联系我。
2023-06-01
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  • alex.sunny
    靠,发了半天私信也发不出去,回复也不能回复带邮箱的。
    2016-05-26
  • oppo
    开发信模版
    2016-05-26
  • oppo
    针对客户产品已经有同类产品的开发信模版。

    模板2 (克服问题法)

    RE: Hi John,

    Good morning!

    I
    just visited your web site, and studied your customers’ feedback on
    your product XXXX. It sounds that your customers (390 customers remarked
    online) are demanding to: XXXXX 陈述一下客户潜在的问题。

    We have succefully helped 20 customerolved this problem. XXXXX(描述一下细节,给点具体的信息。不要太详细,留个伏笔,下次再联系他)

    Very briefly about ABC Company, we have abundant experience serving XXXX,XXXX customers (先给2个大客户的名字,最好是同目标客户时同类的。).
    We have paed ISO9001, and our products has paed UPC certificate. We
    are very confident that you can rely on us as a capable vendor.

    May
    you give me a chance to present you more information on this? I will be
    glad to send you more detailed information upon your consent.

    Best regards,
    XXXX
    2016-05-26
  • oppo
    邦友的回复带邮箱地址的瞬间都被删掉了,如果有要的,私信。
    为了避免被误认为是货代骗子,给大家放2个针对客户产品已经有同类产品的开发信模版。

    模板1 (推荐新品法)
    Hi John,
    Good morning!
    We are a candidate vendor for XXX company, currently we are serving XXXX,XXXX customers (先给2个大客户的名字,最好是同目标客户时同类的。). We have paed ISO9001, and our products has paed UPC certificate. We are very confident that you can rely on us as a capable vendor.

    I am writing to introduce a new product to you. This product is targeting 20-29 years’ lady. The sales in XXX market have proven to be very succeful. Within only 2 months, the sales have reached 100000 units. I noticed from your web site, that 20-29 years’ lady is one of your major clientele, so introduction of product XXX should be a big sales hit for you.

    BTW, we have the samples ready. Do you want to evaluate this new product XXXX?

    Best regards,
    XXXXX
    2016-05-26
  • kevinlee
    这怎么感觉是骗邮箱地址,联系方法..然后推广货代,平台,啥的啥的,个人感觉.
    2016-05-26
  • oppo
    回复的邮箱地址都带星号看不到,给我发私信吧
    2016-05-25
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