大家来找茬---我的第二封发信

邦美眉
大家来找茬---我的第二封发信
Dear Sir,
Hello,this Bella from ShiJiaZhuang shangguang Industrial Cord Co.,ltd. in China. we produce polyester dipped cord has been 17 years, occupies the majority of market share in the Chinese market.We supply polyester cable stiff cord,polyester cable soft cord and EPDM cord. Hope to establish business relationship with you! we can send the samples to you. Any question,please do not hesitate to contact with us. Your promot reply will be highly appreciated. Give me a reply, let's talk more! Thank you!
Best Regards,
2014-06-18 301阅读
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Bella
2023-06-11
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  • [该账户已注销]
    谢谢
    2014-06-22
  • flower
    "we produce polyester ...“,改为 we he been in the field of polyester...for 17years 或者we he produced polyester...for 17years.最重要的是你要说出你们的优势
    2014-06-21
  • [该账户已注销]
    怎么改,帮我改改
    2014-06-20
  • zozo
    格式问题哦!
    2014-06-18
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