各位大神帮帮忙，我这里有什么问题，没回复啊，新人求指教

Dear sirs: We got your informations from XXX, from that we know you are business in dyes. We are XXX import & export??co., ltd. we are suppling dyestuff??to more than 20 countries. We are the most professional dyes and pigments. Our products range from acid dyes, basic dyes, direct dyes, sulphur dyes. with good quality and very competitive price. We like to establish business relations with you and your company. If you are interested in our products, don't hesitate??contact us or you can visit our website get more informations. Look forward to your reply and wish you he a nice day. Best regards XXX

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2013-06-25 529阅读

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AI回答：

亲爱的先生们：
我们从XXX获得了您的信息，从中我们知道您在染料方面有业务。

我们是XXX进出口有限公司，我们向20个以上的国家供应染料。我们是最专业的染料和颜料公司。
我们的产品范围包括酸性染料、碱性染料、直接染料、硫化染料。质量好且价格非常有竞争力。

我们希望与您和您的公司建立业务关系。如果您对我们的产品感兴趣，请毫不犹豫地与我们联系，或者您也可以访问我们的网站获取更多信息。

期待您的回复，并祝您有愉快的一天。

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XXX

2023-06-30

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Syed.Reazul.Karim2

谢谢啊
2013-06-26
winnyzhou

语句用词都没什么太大问题

只是陈述过于累赘第一人称用的太多都是we we are our

Dear sirs:
We got your informations from XXX, knowing that you are business in dyes.

This is XXX from XXX import & export co., ltd. suppling dyestuff to more than 20 countries with good quality and very competitive price.

If you are in the market for it, be free to ask for a quotation.

Look forward to your reply and wish you he a nice day.

Best regards
XXX
2013-06-26

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