大家帮我看看这封邮件有没有问题 谢谢各位了

Solar.panel.supplier
Dear Sir/Madam,
He a nice day!
Thank you for your letter dated Dec.5.We are Chi Shing New Energy Co.,Ltd which mainly manufacture crystalline solar modules with yearly capacity 150MW.
Regarding the load cell you inquired, much as we would like to cooperate with you in expanding our business area,but we are regretful that we are not able to afford that kind of product as a solar panel manufacturer.
Please allow me to send our company introduction for your kind reference.
We sincerely hope we would he opportunity to cooperate in the future.
Wishing the best in your business!
大家帮忙看看有没有不合适的地方,尤其是语气上面。
2014-12-08 372阅读
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以下是可能需要更改的地方:

1. "He a nice day"应该为"Have a nice day"。
2. "but we are regretful"应该为"However, we regret to inform you"。
3. "he opportunity"应该为"the opportunity"。
4. 可能需要对邮件进行重新排版和调整,以使其更加清晰和易于阅读。

建议邮件内容可以修改为:

Dear Sir/Madam,

Hope this email finds you well. Thank you for your letter dated Dec.5, and your interest in our company, Chi Shing New Energy Co., Ltd. As a manufacturer of crystalline solar modules with yearly capacity of 150MW, we appreciate the opportunity to introduce ourselves to you.

Regarding the load cell you inquired about, we regret to inform you that as a solar panel manufacturer, we are not equipped to provide that kind of product. However, we sincerely hope we will have the opportunity to cooperate with you in the future and explore business opportunities together.

Please find attached our company introduction for your reference, and let us know if you have any further questions. We wish you the best in your business.

Best regards,

[Your Name]
2023-05-22
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