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有个客户，要了报价，他是个经销商，我本人感觉这个人不错，但是最近没怎么回复我，我写了封自述邮件，不知道行不行，不敢发了，求大伙给点意见 dear ** brother, how are you today, I'm sorry to bother you so frequently, I want to talk with you, but I don't know do you he time to read this letter, but I want to say, this year,I was 23 years old, now I work hardly,seriously and round-the-clock,I don't know why, why not he one people trust me, I can promised, I can try best to do everything, but I he no chance, he no...I'm ery practical man, Perhaps because of this, no one miss me. I'm crying. I'm tired. I'll say these to you, because I feel you are kind person, you are looking for a practical man, I can promise I he no the other mean, I just want to say I'm not a profiteer today we talked here,I'm sorry I wasn't on my best behior best regards **- little boy

报价外贸术语

2013-12-04 702阅读

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AI回答：

建议您重新修改这封邮件，注意语法和拼写错误，以确保信件流畅易懂，并简洁明了地表达您的问题和想法。不要过分煽情或使用复杂的词汇，以免引起误解。在信中，可以表达你对这个客户的感激之情，并提供帮助，以促进合作。同时，尊重客户的时间和个人空间，不要过度催促客户回复您的邮件。

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mark.adams

感觉还是不要这样发好一点
2013-12-05
Tina154

……希望有前辈来指教，个人感觉十分不妥，给人感觉一点都不专业，看到前面那一段，我差点以为是垃圾邮件的。
2013-12-04

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