各位老师帮我修改一下发信吧 谢谢谢谢

K.Burgess
Glad to write to you! This is Amy Young from XXXCo., Ltd. in China. It’s my pleasure to acquire your esteemed company information. I would like take this opportunity for the establishment of business relations with you. We're one of the leading MANUFACTURERS of high quality window and door fabricating machinery with competitive price! Our products range from pvc window industry, aluminum industry, as well as insulating glass industry. You may free to visit us at for more information. Should any of the items be of interest to you, we would like provide you more information as well as the best price upon receipt of your detailed requirements. Any questions, pls do not hesitate to contact me. I will be waiting for your earlier reply. Thank you! Best regards, Amy
2013-09-16 628阅读
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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to introduce myself as Amy Young from XXXCo., Ltd. in China. I am pleased to have the opportunity to learn about your esteemed company and I would like to establish a business relationship with you.

Our company is a leading manufacturer of high-quality window and door fabricating machinery. We specialize in products for the PVC window industry, aluminum industry, and insulating glass industry. Our products are competitively priced and we invite you to visit our website at (insert website address) for more information. If you find any of our products of interest to you, please provide us with your detailed requirements and we will gladly provide you with more information and our best prices.

If you have any questions or require further information, please do not hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Thank you for your attention.

Best Regards,

Amy Young
2023-06-25
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  • 江枫
    You may free to visit us at for more information
    有的是送样品的
    能不能吧free去掉呀

    我看一般的发信是在最后面写上

    website
    Email XXXXXXX
    XXX公司什么的

    其实也不一定要这样写
    只是一个提议哦,也许你这样的老外也很喜欢的
    个人有个人的爱好
    昨天看见论坛里的一个外国人写发信给咱们国家的
    老长了,大部分人都没心思看,但是老外觉得他的发信挺好的。
    也许他喜欢长一点的。
    有的也喜欢短的

    个人喜好不同的
    2013-09-19
  • Lui.Bob
    写了好多封,没有效果,可是修改又无从下手,麻烦前辈们啦
    2013-09-18
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