外贸发信,求指导

Simon.Tsen
dear ron kirk, hope everything is going fine with you as well as your business & family. this is wendy yang from guangzhou clean-link filtration technology co.ltd, glad to hear that you ’re? ?in the maket for memdiu efficiency filters,high efficiency filters,high temperature filters and so on.we specialize in??this field??for seval years , with??the strength of??pre-efficiency filter,ceiling filter,memdiu efficiency filters and so on.as we are manifactory ,our price is pretty competitive .you are welcome to visit our website?? . should any of these items be of interest to you, please let us know, we will be happy to give you details.free sample will be sent for your evaluation. best regards,
2013-06-28 4354阅读
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Hello Wendy,

Thank you for reaching out to Ron Kirk. Your email is well-written, and it's great that you've expressed your interest in supplying memdiu efficiency filters, high efficiency filters, and high-temperature filters.

A few suggestions to improve your email:

1. Greet the recipient by using their full name and title. For example, "Dear Mr. Kirk,".
2. Begin by briefly introducing yourself and your company, including your location.
3. Mention the specific products or services you offer and how they can benefit the recipient's business.
4. Highlight your company's experience and expertise in the industry.
5. Provide a clear call to action, such as inviting the recipient to visit your website for more information.
6. Mention that you can provide samples for evaluation if there is interest.

Here's a revised version of your email:

"Dear Mr. Kirk,

I hope this email finds you and your business in good health and prosperity. My name is Wendy Yang, and I represent Guangzhou Clean-Link Filtration Technology Co. Ltd, based in Guangzhou, China.

I am delighted to learn that you are currently seeking memdiu efficiency filters, high efficiency filters, high-temperature filters, and other related products. With several years of specialization in this field, we pride ourselves on offering pre-efficiency filters, ceiling filters, memdiu efficiency filters, and more. Being a manufacturer, we can assure you of our competitive pricing. For more information, please feel free to visit our website [insert website link].

If any of these items catch your interest, please do not hesitate to let us know. We would be more than happy to provide you with further details, and if needed, we can send you free samples for evaluation.

Thank you for your time and consideration. We look forward to the opportunity to work with you and establish a mutually beneficial partnership.

Best regards,
Wendy Yang
Guangzhou Clean-Link Filtration Technology Co. Ltd
[insert contact information]"
2023-06-30
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  • raquel.ávalos
    感觉最好几句话就概括~~~
    2013-06-30
  • 小贸贸
    AFI Air Filters Inc/ manufacturer of air filters/Guangzhou Clean-Link Filtration Technology Co., Ltd  

    Dear Ron Kirk,
    Hope everything is going fine with you as well as your Business & Family.

    This is wendy yang from Guangzhou clean-link filtration technology co.,Ltd.Glad to hear that you ’re  in the maket for air filter ,we specialize in  this field  for 6 years ,we are factory,our price is pretty competitive .You are welcome to visit our website

    Should any of these it
    2013-06-30
  • Ria.Rasheed
    有的啰嗦。可否在简洁点?
    2013-06-29
  • Rosion
    我新手,不过我的发信一般是固定式问候,good day 。然后针对可续需求产品介绍,介绍自己公司。向你这样的,个人感觉是合作熟了之后的客户的信件,增加感情。第一份就这样,可能人家设置垃圾信件单词,直接进垃圾箱。不对的勿喷,跟人感觉
    2013-06-29
  • kitty7
    可以的,第一封信回复的概率本人暂时为0,所以发发去就可以了
    2013-06-29
  • estadistica.materiales
    觉得有点累赘哦

    您可以看看这篇文章:zllpmyyjjjjjylzw?rva4660869a1a1_zlgd
    2013-06-29
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