求助翻译啊

客人想把产品的单价降下来，让我给他建议，总觉自己翻译很生硬，请大家多多指教 中文 1.滴塑：用国产滴塑，颜色会发黄并且不透明，有异味，硬度较软 2.不锈钢：厚度由原来的0.5mm变为0.4mm，补抛光会有点割手 3.包装：没有皮套包装，直接用ipp袋子包装 pls see the suggestion as below 1.epoxy:use poorer quality epoxy,the colour will be yellowing and not transparent,he an unpleasant odor ,relatively weak and soft 2.stainless steel thickness:shed 0.1 millimeters off its waistline compared with the original, which was 0.4 millimeters thick,without polishing,it will be easy to cut the hand 3.package:without pu cover,each product per opp bag