【100%原创】:一个80后外贸业务员的自述(英文版)(感谢大家建议,更新版)

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My name is Jim, an International trade salesman, live in Qingdao.I was born in 1987, a small village in China–a land which I he a complicated feelings towards it.All men there are created equal, but live unequally.Poor peoples' only hope is to study the knowledge that they never use in their lives;just for passing the examination they hated;go to college where they waste their best time in life.After graduation, staying in a city, live a “Happy Life” in other people’s eyes.This is the life of majority Chinese young men .However, I always think I’m a lucky dog ! Thank God!Because I didn't lost myself under this circumstance!I can still think and make decisions by my-own brain;distinguish what are the meaningful things to me;pursue love, truth, beauty and kindness in my life and work.He great enthusiasm for International Trade, language and IT.Good at Organic chemicals raw material, to become an expert in this field is my aim.Inner-energy and strong curiosity drive me work with heart and soul!A young man full of positive energy keeps on going!
2013-05-07 1304阅读
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Nice to meet you, Jim! It's great to hear about your passion for international trade, languages, and IT. It's important to have a strong sense of purpose and to pursue what truly matters to you in life and work. It's also commendable that you've been able to maintain your individuality and make your own decisions in a society that can sometimes be restrictive.

It seems like you have a specific expertise in organic chemicals raw material, which is an important field in international trade. Being knowledgeable and skilled in a specific area can definitely help you excel in your career.

Keep up the positive energy and continue to pursue your goals and interests. If you have any specific questions or concerns related to international trade, feel free to ask, and I'll be happy to help you!
2023-07-04
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  • Export.HOuse.NG
    想表达一个遭遇悲催但一直诚实上进的jim
    2013-05-16
  • villa
    感谢拍砖,我也感觉有可能没有我们这样的文化背景  理解有难度, 我是想引出
    examination-oriented education;
    twisted social values
    我的悲催遭遇。 有什么高见? 提提
    2013-05-15
  • Export.HOuse.NG
    Good suggestion 我也感觉  但是 改句式时感觉功力不够啊!可以帮帮忙,改一句也行
    2013-05-15
  • 张华
    我觉得用第一人称太多了,很重复,按英语写作课上的讲法是“显得过于自我’。可以在句式上调整下。
    还有后面那么多形容词。。。
    2013-05-14
  • Kip.Kuo
    未必老外明白你的幽默,还神奇的国土,那不是印度吗?
    2013-05-14
  • Connie8
    你想表达啥?
    2013-05-13
  • J..B.Meric
    不过这英语是挺溜的哈,值得肯定~
    2013-05-13
  • villa
    怎么始时JIM 后面又是JACK,,费解啊
    2013-05-11
  • bc2
    谢谢鼓励! 是准备放在我的个人网站里的,方便国外客户了解自己的,欢迎拍砖,里面用词不到位或有更好的用词,各位前辈帮我提提
    2013-05-10
  • bc2
    谢谢支持
    2013-05-10
  • jennifer5
    不错~写的很好~
    2013-05-09
  • Connie8
    谢谢鼓励!
    也欢迎拍砖,里面用词不到位或有更好的用词,各位前辈帮我提提!
    2013-05-08
  • fang.ye
    挺有新意的
    2013-05-08
  • Sophia2
    支持!
    2013-05-07
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