建立业务关系的信函是这样写吗？

建立业务关系的信函是这样写吗？ 各位前辈，朋友，本人走出校门，第一次踏上外贸这个行业。以前在学校学的都是理论知识，如今要付出实践，第一次写外贸信函给老外，尚不知理论与实践有多大区别。请各位前辈、朋友多多指教，本人在此万分感谢！ dear sirs, we he obtained your name and address through the china bank newyork branch.we take the liberty of writing to you with iew to building up business relations with your firm.we are a compang specializing in export of chinese textiles.these products he a good market in europe.we are enclosing herewith a catalogue for your examination.should any of the items be of interest to you,please contact us. in our trade with merchants of various countries,we always adhere to the principal of equality and mutual benefit.it is our hope to promote,by joint efforts,both trade and friendship to our mutual advantage. we look forward to receiving your enquiries soon. yours faithfully 请各位前辈和朋友能分享一下从学校到工作、从理论到实践、从始到现在的你们的经历和经验，让我们新人可以多多学习，本人在此再次感谢！