刚刚了一位有经验的大侠,经过他的指点,我了修改,请大家看看:
Dear Meier,
Sorry to my late reply. I was discussing your price with my general manager yesterday, so I can't reply you soon.
As you know, a nice discount has given you before(usd18.67/pc). Heat treatment fee, freight, delivery fee to the Shanghai port and insurance fee will cost us a lot of money.
Furthermore, you cut a great lot for 27%, that really unacceptable. Actually, we are far from 27% of profit for this business, how can I give you 27% discount? S[收起]