催单邮件怎么发?

为了在圣诞节前让他再下一单，所以发了一个邮件。

Dear Brett,
How are you? It it a little long time no
contact.Today is the beginning of August.Wish good
luck to you and your family, your business.As some of our customers want to catch thel
chances to sell good before Christmas.
To help and meet their request..We will do the
promotion.If you buy goods from us in these two
month..We will have discounts.$20 reduce if you buy 10 cartons of toys from
us..You can save $300 at most..
Attachment is something related
Christmas..Kindly check if you like anything..Aslowe will have
the discountsif you want to repeat any orders from our factory
-XXX.We noted some of our goods appear in your
website.Can you please kindly tell me if any flaw of our toys?We promise to replace or refund in the
next order..
Wait for your kind reply..Good luck XXX.