工作邮件对照,大家多给建议

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刚始接单,主管给了个客户让我去跟,一下是我的邮件和主管的对照,请各位多给建议啊。 我的邮件: dear, my name is? ?, i am a saleman from? ?, i will assist your business with us from now on. we he got your purchase order 80011, there is a problem we need your help: could you send us your sample of 22brzand mosgent? looking forward to your reply best regards 主管的邮件: dear? ? , i am? ???in? ?? ? company. thank you for the new order. and i am glad that i will be in charge of the business between you and our company. i he checked the po carefully. and we need your help to express us a small piece of samples for model ... and ...??because we he never received the? ? samples about these two models before. looking forward to your reply. and thanks in advance.
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1. 注意英文语法和拼写,尤其是大小写的使用。
2. 进一步提升邮件的礼貌和专业程度,例如使用更正式的开头和结尾,表达感谢等。
3. 清晰明了地提出具体要求,例如需要什么样的样品、何时需要收到样品等。
4. 尽量使用客户的名称或公司名称,而不是"dear"。
5. 确保提到了具体的订单号和产品型号信息,以证明自己是在针对客户的需求进行沟通。
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