工作邮件对照,大家多给建议
刚始接单,主管给了个客户让我去跟,一下是我的邮件和主管的对照,请各位多给建议啊。
我的邮件:
dear,
my name is? ?, i am a saleman from? ?, i will assist your business with us from now on. we he got your purchase order 80011, there is a problem we need your help:
could you send us your sample of 22brzand mosgent?
looking forward to your reply
best regards
主管的邮件:
dear? ? ,
i am? ???in? ?? ? company. thank you for the new order. and i am glad that i will be in charge of the business between you and our company.
i he checked the po carefully.
and we need your help to express us a small piece of samples for model ... and ...??because we he never received the? ? samples about these two models before.
looking forward to your reply.
and thanks in advance.[收起]
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