语气太过生硬,而且语句也不太通顺,有点长有点复杂,我稍微修改了下,您看会不会好些?
Dear Mark,
How are you?
Since I hen't received your reply yet, so I wonder if had received my below email?
If yes, could you pls kindly inform us your further idea about the samples?
Your early reply will be highly appreciated.[收起]