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Anne
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Dear Sirs,


Wish
you enjoy a great day!






This
is Anna from Shandong Runyuan Industry Co.Ltd .We are a agricultural machinery
manufacture from China. We have passed through ISO9001:2008.
certification.


Gald
to know you are in the market of agricultural machinery manufacture


Our
company push out new products recently ,high quality with low price.


It
would be our pleasure to begin a business relationship with you and supply you
with our quality products,.


May
i know whether you need our product?


Waiting
for your kind reply !


The
quotations are in the affix.
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你好，以下是针对你的开发信的修改建议：

Dear Sir/Madam,

I hope this message finds you well.

My name is Anna and I represent Shandong Runyuan Industry Co. Ltd., a trusted agricultural machinery manufacturer in China. We are proud to hold the ISO9001:2008 certification, which signifies our commitment to quality.

I am reaching out to you because I understand that you are interested in agricultural machinery and I wanted to let you know that we have recently launched new high-quality products at a competitive price point.

We would be honored to establish a business relationship with you and provide our exceptional products to meet your needs. Would you be interested in learning more about our products and prices? If so, please let me know and I will be happy to provide you with a detailed quotation that is attached to this email.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,

Anna
2023-05-31
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  • 勋勋
    Dear Sir，
    Wish you enjoy a great day!


    Gald to know you are in the market of agricultural machinery manufacture
    This is Anna from Shandong Runyuan Industry Co.Ltd .We are a agricultural machinery manufacture from China with high quality, pretty competitive price, ISO9001:2008. certification.

    Any comments or questions will be appreciated.

    Anna
    2016-08-08
  • JasonDon
    个人觉得客户需要才是王道，开发信都大同小异
    2016-07-27
  • vivian
    Dear Sirs,


    Wish you enjoy a great day!



    This is Anna from Shandong Runyuan Industry Co.Ltd .

    We are a agricultural machinery manufacture with ISO9001:2008.

    Gald to know you are in the market of agricultural machinery manufacture

    May i know whether you need our product?




    Waiting for your kind reply !


    The quotations are in the affix.


    我也是新人，哈哈来回帖赚分，
    我看我师父的就是简介，有时候没主语人家也看得懂你要干啥的，最好插入图片，调小一点
    2016-07-27
  • 免费鹰眼搜找客户
    开发信 简洁明了 介绍清楚 就好 不用太多文字
    2016-07-27
  • 周北北
    我一般就一句话 基本都不介绍公司，这些资料会放在签名里
    2016-07-27
  • Kily.Yang
    Dear Sir，
    Wish you enjoy a great day!


    Gald to know you are in the market of agricultural machinery manufacture
    This is Anna from Shandong Runyuan Industry Co.Ltd .We are a agricultural machinery manufacture from China with high quality, pretty competitive price, ISO9001:2008. certification.

    Any interests, please call me. Let's talk.

    Anna
    Moblile: xxxxxx
    2016-07-27
  • Clara
    我觉得简短是最重要的。
    2016-07-27
  • Anne
    谢谢。这样更有条理了
    2016-07-21
  • Carol
    Dear Sir，
    Wish you enjoy a great day!


    Gald to know you are in the market of agricultural machinery manufacture

    This is Anna from Shandong Runyuan Industry Co.Ltd .We are a agricultural machinery manufacture from China with high quality and low price，and we alsopaed through ISO9001:2008. certification.


    It would be our pleasure to begin a busine relationship with you.

    E-catalog will be sent to you at once if you are interested.


    Waiting for your kind reply !

    已稍作修改，愿对你有帮助
    2016-07-21
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