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Dear Madam/Sir
I am ashley ,A sales from a factory ,Firstly,Sorry to Bother you!
KeyWord: moving head light,LED lighting,strobe,par light,2R/5R/7R,Manufacturer...
Content Above is the keyword,if you are not interested in it,please ignore and delate this letter,and Say Sorry to you again,
Or you can see detailed introduction about Us and our Products Below!
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Factory Name:Guangzhou Shinelight Stage Equipment Factory
Main Products:280W image light,LED moving head,beam 2R/5R/7R/330w/1200w,follow spot light,strobe3000W,led par light
1. 280w image&spot: Osram lamp,20chns,14colors,17gobos,rotate eight prisms/rows of mirros,new
2. LED 150w moving head: 16chns,50000h lifespan,two gobo wheel,3 prisms,lcd display,new
3. Mini beam 2R: 11.5kg,180w,16chns,turn fast,hot selling
4. LED par:12*10w(rgbwa,rgbwp)/18*12w(4in1,5in1,6in1) .............
Any thing about Our Products or others,Please Let Us Know,We are happy to Communicate with you!
Best Regards
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