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title? ?? ???re:various disposable razors and blades as you reply hi, how are you doing? our company focus on razors and blades in the past 10 years,which located in the professional razors manufacturing center ningbo city ,china. product:single (or twin,triple,four)blade razors medical razors none or he lubricating strip hanging packages ,blister cards,poly bags as you needed need the price list? no hesitate to talk to me. skype:### email:### website:####
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Dear [Recipient],

I hope this email finds you well. We are a company specializing in the production and manufacturing of razors and blades, located in Ningbo City, China - a professional manufacturing hub.

Our product line includes single, twin, triple and four-blade razors, as well as medical razors. We offer a range of packaging options including hanging packages, blister cards and poly bags, with and without lubricating strips.

If you are interested, we would be more than happy to share our price list with you. Please don't hesitate to contact us at [Skype], [Email] or visit our website at [Website].

Thank you and wishing you a great day.

Best regards,
[Your Name]
2023-06-23
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  • Jimmy8
    嗯,明白了,谢谢!
    2013-12-30
  • Supratik
    第一句是多余了而且不正式,没有那么多时间看长篇大论的,言简意赅即可
    2013-12-30
  • 南晓丽
    outlook邮箱。不知道你是用什么发客户?
    2013-12-30
  • danish2
    学习了!
    2013-12-29
  • Supratik
    问题补充:

    你的发信是通过撒发的?Gmail?
    2013-12-29
  • 周乔
    其实老外也很在乎实力的吧 如果可以的话 建议楼主找邮件外包服务商设计一套精美的邮件(不过没绝对必要哈,只是锦上添花的效果),因为图片邮件的信息含量要远远大于文字邮件,而且可读性更强一点,本来信率就不高,一旦点击了,就要绝对吸引眼球不是?

    针对你发的这个Sample,有点个人意见

    Re:various disposable razors and blades as you reply---标题:发信,怎么会有RE标记呢 还有就是建议标题这么写

    Various Disposable Razors and Blades with Good Price(XXX,反正加点修饰啦)

    Hi,
       How are you doing?-------商务邮件的头还是要正式一点,貌似大家也都建议你更换,比较方便的可以写成To whom it may concern,如果知道对方姓名的 加上敬语比较好

       Our company focus on razors and blades in the past 10 years,which located in the pr
    2013-12-28
  • RODRIGO.NOGUEIRA
    头最好用 Dear purchasing manager
    2013-12-28
  • baas
    说的对
    2013-12-27
  • vipul.shah2
    第一句就免了。啰嗦,人家老外哪有那么多时间看
    2013-12-12
  • wang
    是吗?你们都是怎么头的?
    2013-12-11
  • ouyang
    说实话 第一句的那个Hi 立刻不想看下面的 别见怪
    2013-12-11
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