感觉你这个也太简单了吧,而且很生硬!
Dear Purchasing Manager
Good day! 或者 How are you?
So glad to send this letter to you!
China bearing factory here,
Exporting bearings with competitive price.
If you have any requirements or questions, pls call me , and let's talk details
Quality first ,Repputation above all.
Thanks&Best regards
其他的你可以再看看加一点。 开发信可以简洁点,但是我感觉也要客气点。[收起]